Category Alien Contact: Becoming Human

Effing Feline is one smart cart

I, Effing Feline, have figured out something about today’s snippet. In Mr V’s WIP, Alien Contact: Becoming Human, the following ten sentences state the heroine’ self-doubt and internal conflict. Furthermore, her decision to detour for pleasure leads to all her troubles, and I believe that’s called an inciting incident. I am one smart cart.  I mean, cat.  I’m […]

Effing Feline, Jailbird

I, Effing Feline, am a jailbird. That word makes me hissing mad. I’m not a bird! Remember last week when I gave up trying to be good and let my true self out to play?  Well, Ed Hoornaert, aka Mr. Valentine, busted me for it. So now I’m forced to behave again. Today’s snippet continues the opening […]

Effing Feline, Recidivist

I, Fart-Fueled Flying Feline, tried to behave myself. I failed, so of course I gave up. This week I scratched the couch where Ed Hoornaert, aka Mr. Valentine, couldn’t see. I barfed up furballs under the bed, in a closet, and in a shoe. I scratched the mail lady, delivering a new network router. There should […]