Rescuing Prince Charming 1 #MFRWHooks

Welcome to the Marketing for Romance Writers blog hop, Book Hooks. Writers share a short snippet of their works to entice you.

I’m highlighting Rescuing Prince Charming, a science fiction romance that will be released December 4. Here’s the book’s back cover blurb. It’s still raw, so if you have any suggestions, please fire away.

Dusty Johnson, a self-styled ordinary, everyday woman, responds with extraordinary heroism when saboteurs try to bomb the prototype of Earth’s first starship. Although she yearns to return to anonymity, her moment of courage propels her ever deeper into dangers that tear the scabs off her dark past—and thrusts her into the arms of the unattainable man of her dreams.

Reese Eaglesbrood, an alien prince, yearns to restore his tattered reputation by guiding the starship project to completion, but his fascination with the unassuming heroine threatens to undermine his fragile authority. Shunning Dusty is necessary, yet unthinkable—and when the saboteurs strike again, she is his only ally against Earth’s most elusive enemies.

What do you think? Would this blurb hook you?

 

 

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8 comments

  1. Definitely! That’s quite a conflict.

    1. I tried to hint at both the internal and external conflicts.

  2. Certainly gets my interest! Good luck with this, Ed!

    1. Thanks so much, Hywela.

  3. The line – tears the scabs off her dark past- fabulous line!!!!

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    1. If you want secrets to remain secret, it’s best not to draw too much attention to yourself.

  4. Good job. Definitely hooked me,

    1. And I didn’t even have to use a worm . . .

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